tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6902026.post110738847459574563..comments2023-07-16T02:28:41.444-07:00Comments on The Proving Ground: Chapter 12 - version 2Nathaniel Cornstalkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05784953716180250232noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6902026.post-1108012700210435432005-02-09T21:18:00.000-08:002005-02-09T21:18:00.000-08:00Its better, just still seems slightly passive, som...Its better, just still seems slightly passive, somehowMartenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11351456588053840629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6902026.post-1107388615523627122005-02-02T15:56:00.000-08:002005-02-02T15:56:00.000-08:00I didn't change it that much, but i like this vers...I didn't change it that much, but i like this version better. Either way I'm moving on. Tell me what you think.Nathaniel Cornstalkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05784953716180250232noreply@blogger.com