tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6902026.post111482395149301897..comments2023-07-16T02:28:41.444-07:00Comments on The Proving Ground: COM Prelude # 1: AriadneNathaniel Cornstalkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05784953716180250232noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6902026.post-1116334459639620702005-05-17T05:54:00.000-07:002005-05-17T05:54:00.000-07:00Does she ever get to Canderlass???Does she ever get to Canderlass???Martenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11351456588053840629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6902026.post-1114999024386382032005-05-01T18:57:00.000-07:002005-05-01T18:57:00.000-07:00I don't like the ending myself, but if I kept goin...I don't like the ending myself, but if I kept going I feared I would have given away too much about the Red Wytches. I want an aura of mystery around them when they first show up in the real story.Nathaniel Cornstalkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05784953716180250232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6902026.post-1114997806079298682005-05-01T18:36:00.000-07:002005-05-01T18:36:00.000-07:00This is a fascinating story already, with good cha...This is a fascinating story already, with good characters. The ending was a little abrupt, but other than that I really liked your description and voice. :) Keep it up!Erinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07998763082812999453noreply@blogger.com