tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6902026.post111593481072182168..comments2023-07-16T02:28:41.444-07:00Comments on The Proving Ground: Chapter 26: ZhongNathaniel Cornstalkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05784953716180250232noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6902026.post-1116855425063413132005-05-23T06:37:00.000-07:002005-05-23T06:37:00.000-07:00what, that he's written the main character as hims...what, that he's written the main character as himself? I thought that was a given...Martenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11351456588053840629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6902026.post-1115937924652956632005-05-12T15:45:00.000-07:002005-05-12T15:45:00.000-07:00You're very close to crossing the border between s...You're very close to crossing the border between subtle hint and large mallet.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6902026.post-1115935391803363812005-05-12T15:03:00.000-07:002005-05-12T15:03:00.000-07:00Oooh! Cliffhanger! I like this chapter. And the fa...Oooh! Cliffhanger! I like this chapter. And the fact that the main character has to be dumb for plot reasons. It's a big problem with protagonists throughout literature. A problem for the character, not the reader.Erinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07998763082812999453noreply@blogger.com