tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6902026.post112974815535898728..comments2023-07-16T02:28:41.444-07:00Comments on The Proving Ground: City of Mages Chapter VNathaniel Cornstalkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05784953716180250232noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6902026.post-1130468502034094702005-10-27T20:01:00.000-07:002005-10-27T20:01:00.000-07:00quite intriguing, kiddo, but I am bothered by line...quite intriguing, kiddo, but I am bothered by line 9 in chapter V, he "flew the axe" ....I know language is changing, I have heard the arguments and all, but are we now to understand that transitive and intransitive verbs are interchangeable on a whim? Sorry to be picky, but.....<BR/><BR/>otherwise I really liked it!<BR/>all the best,<BR/>supertherapistAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6902026.post-1130211137883632192005-10-24T20:32:00.000-07:002005-10-24T20:32:00.000-07:00Ooh, lovely! This chapter is very well-written, I ...Ooh, lovely! This chapter is very well-written, I think one of your best so far.<BR/>And, yes, that guide would be helpful. :)Erinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07998763082812999453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6902026.post-1130202778641519112005-10-24T18:12:00.000-07:002005-10-24T18:12:00.000-07:00try: "The tree was not meant to be zapped!" The fo...try: "The tree was not meant to be zapped!" The fountain gurgled and boomed [insert adverb here. ex: menacingly]. <BR/><BR/>Must brush up on my doom pixie knowledge. <BR/><BR/>Can't wait to see more of the various plotlines forming and hopefully connecting!Eveyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07764961738219048915noreply@blogger.com